What are the strengths or what is working well in the script? if none, write "none."
Some very good interpersonal moments between the characters, and some moving scenes. Overall strong dialogue, and a decent start to the character development.
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FOOL’S GOLD
A man comes back home after 14 years overseas to reconnect with his family.
Don’t be afraid of people.
New England
Drama
family, suspense
Short Film
Current day
118
3/5
Somewhat fresh4/5
Many4/5
Often3/5
Average - usable as a title but could use improvment2/5
Fair - either applies or adds meaning but not both3/5
Somewhat3/5
Somewhat2/5
A little2/5
31-50% of the material is unnecessary4/5
Most of the story3/5
Goal is somewhat clear4/5
Mostly clear2/5
A little3/5
Sometimes3/5
Somewhat compelling3/5
Somewhat has the appropriate amount of traits2/5
A little3/5
Somewhat4/5
Compelling4/5
Good3/5
Some included exposition and backstory is necessary, some is not4/5
Most included flashbacks are all necessary or helpful4/5
A little3/5
Some3/5
Somewhat